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Broken by caska1979 Broken by caska1979
Sie stehen eng umschlungen
ein Fleischgemisch so reich an Tagen
wo das Meer das Land berührt
will sie ihm die Wahrheit sagen

Doch ihre Worte frisst der Wind
wo das Meer zu Ende ist
hält sie zitternd seine Hand
und hat ihn auf die Stirn geküsst

Sie trägt den Abend in der Brust
und weiß dass sie verleben muss
sie legt den Kopf in seinen Schoß
und bittet einen letzten Kuss

Und dann hat er sie geküsst
wo das Meer zu Ende ist
ihre Lippen schwach und blass
und seine Augen werden nass

Der letzte Kuss ist so lang her
der letzte Kuss
er erinnert sich nicht mehr

(Rammstein - Nebel) [link]
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:iconyourforgiveness:
YourForgiveness Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
*Sorry - very expressive work ;)
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:iconcaska1979:
caska1979 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
Thank you! :)
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:iconyourforgiveness:
YourForgiveness Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
Glad you understood both ways :) Keep up the good work!
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:iconcaska1979:
caska1979 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
Capisco, ma riesco a scrivere solo il italiano...
My English is very bad! :P
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:iconyourforgiveness:
YourForgiveness Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
Well, my Italian is worse ;)

So keep it English or... Google is our friend, you know :)
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:iconcaska1979:
caska1979 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
I know, but I do not trust much of his translation... in most cases the phrases it has a strange "sound"...
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:iconyourforgiveness:
YourForgiveness Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
Yeah, that is unfortunately true but it is more than nothing. At least :)
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:iconcaska1979:
caska1979 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
Yeah, better than nothing... ;)
(I have the impression that you are a very sweet person)
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:iconyourforgiveness:
YourForgiveness Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
Ganz ausdrucksvolle Arbeit :nod:
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:iconcaska1979:
caska1979 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
Danke! :)
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